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Post by ads on Dec 2, 2015 1:10:25 GMT -8
However , It still feel more like an Amourshipping fanfic with more Naruto /School rumble situation. Plus , Ash's feeling need to be unconfirmed if Writer wants to support all Shipping. Also , There are people who runt about Ash stealing all the spotlight from Dawn in DP even though Dawn got more thing then Ash ever got in this 20 year. Also May , Dawn & Iris never shown confirmed feeling for Ash and Misty's feeling is alleged ! Only 4 girl shown confirmed feeling for Ash and Serena is the only one who actually cute while rest of them are just average-looking. Truth is , May also need to show hint toward Ash as well ! She need show a hint that counter her blushing from "AG 162 : Spontaneous Combusken"!Honestly , Writer should make a similar episode as that one where Serena play the role the "Brianna". Hmm.. . well, I think I overdid the subtlety on that one. . . Okay, to revise, let's remove the ending part where Serena asked Ash about their relationship (it'll be against Pearl shipping anyway). . . They will just go on their separate ways and Ash will look back at her retreating figure. He will then take out the half ribbon which he always bring with him and look at it with a warm smile but with hints of sadness. Then May, as she walked away from them, looked at her other ribbon half with a smile on her lips. Their facial expression seemed to tell that they long for each other, but at the same time understand that they'll see each other again. . . . Then May will find out that the ferry/boat/ whatever got cancelled and frustrate about how she couldn't go to the contest anymore. Then Ash will appear and she will be surprised to see him there. He will then say that he heard about the port being closed and came running to see and comfort her. Because the next contest was until few months later, he invited her to join their group while she waited and she agreed with a smile& slight blush on her cheek. The blushing will be up to viewer's interpretation whether she's red on the cheeks because she's crying or because of Ash's gesture. . . Off course , Ash can use Noivern to help May reach her next contest . Because Noivern is faster then Dragonite and Dragonite is faster then sound which allow him to circle the globe in 16 hour. I mean , What is the point of having 3 flying type if none of them is good enough to give Ash a ride. I think , it would be even Cooler if May faces an emotional turmoil and Drew can't help her recover SO Ash use Noivern to travel all the way to her and then wear a ridiculous outfit & Mask to secretly battle May in order to help her recover. (As he heard from Max or figure out from May's last call) May realize the person inside the Mask is Ash and she's touched to see Ash gone so far just to help her. Plus you said yourself that its better to focus on One girl rather then make Ash a young Harem Protagonist. I believe that Girl should be May because she is exclusive to Pokemon! There aren't any other Anime girl with similar haircut and design as May. I seen a lot of Anime girl with better One-side Ponytail then Misty But I have yet to see any other girl like May. Here is my pairing-- Ash X May Clemont X Serena Drew X Iris Misty X Tracey Brock X Battle Chatelaine Dana Dawn X Gary .
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Post by docboy on Dec 2, 2015 1:49:20 GMT -8
Listen on another note I'm looking for scenarios to write in an advanced shipping story I'm working on. I got a few chapters done but now I'm drawing a blank. Anyone any ideas? What's the story about? It's about movie 9. It started with an alternate ending where may is worried about Ash and gets very emotional and tells him how she feels. So far I wrote six chapters in which the rest of the gang finds out what's going on, the two of them going on a first date in which they get some ice cream, Ash getting May a cupcake for her birthday, Ash saving her life after a confrontation with team rocket and him taking care of her when she gets a fever. That's as far as I got
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Post by M.Press on Dec 2, 2015 2:36:23 GMT -8
Hmm. . . then what about a childhood story? You know, like they know each other since they were young (though they don't know it). Alright, I know it's a bit cliche idea but I love childhood stories.
Then another one, is when they went on a circus/ theme park and there was a play. However, the actors got into an accident (maybe because of Pikachu/ or team rocket) and they got to be the substitute. Next is when May is kidnap by a pokemon, wanting it to be it's mother/guardian and Ash and the gang had to search for her and fight that pokemon. . .
Hmm. . . I'll think of other ideas. . .
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Post by ads on Dec 2, 2015 3:20:30 GMT -8
Hmm. . . then what about a childhood story? You know, like they know each other since they were young (though they don't know it). Alright, I know it's a bit cliche idea but I love childhood stories. Then another one, is when they went on a circus/ theme park and there was a play. However, the actors got into an accident (maybe because of Pikachu/ or team rocket) and they got to be the substitute. Next is when May is kidnap by a Pokémon, wanting it to be it's mother/guardian and Ash and the gang had to search for her and fight that Pokémon. . . Hmm. . . I'll think of other ideas. . . Well , there is a chance that Norman might already know Ash's father if he is a great pokemon trainer . Off course , The Anime can reveal May as Ash's 1st childhood crush. Ash could talk about seeing a Beautiful girl in a summer Festival as a child who made his heart race but he never knew the name of that girl. Later , It turn out to be May who tied her hair in a bun so Ash never knew that the Beautiful girl he saw in the festival was May. Imagine Mietie ask Ash about whom he believe to be a most beautiful girl which cause Ash to remember. Just like Heiji & Kazuha from Detective Conan where Heiji still doesn't know that his 1st crush was Kazuha.
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Post by docboy on Dec 2, 2015 3:32:12 GMT -8
That's a good idea. We could also have may preform in the circus with Pikachu. Like that episode with Misty in season 1
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Post by M.Press on Dec 2, 2015 3:32:22 GMT -8
Hmm. . . then what about a childhood story? You know, like they know each other since they were young (though they don't know it). Alright, I know it's a bit cliche idea but I love childhood stories. Then another one, is when they went on a circus/ theme park and there was a play. However, the actors got into an accident (maybe because of Pikachu/ or team rocket) and they got to be the substitute. Next is when May is kidnap by a Pokémon, wanting it to be it's mother/guardian and Ash and the gang had to search for her and fight that Pokémon. . . Hmm. . . I'll think of other ideas. . . Well , there is a chance that Norman might already know Ash's father if he is a great Pokémon trainer . Off course , The Anime can reveal May as Ash's 1st childhood crush. Ash could talk about seeing a Beautiful girl in a summer Festival as a child who made his heart race but he never knew the name of that girl. Later , It turn out to be May who tied her hair in a bun so Ash never knew that the Beautiful girl he saw in the festival was May. Imagine Mietie ask Ash about whom he believe to be a most beautiful girl which cause Ash to remember. Just like Heiji & Kazuha from Detective Conan where Heiji still doesn't know that his 1st crush was Kazuha. Wow! I really like this idea, I hope they do this T-T
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Post by M.Press on Dec 2, 2015 4:11:10 GMT -8
Hmm.. . well, I think I overdid the subtlety on that one. . . Okay, to revise, let's remove the ending part where Serena asked Ash about their relationship (it'll be against Pearl shipping anyway). . . They will just go on their separate ways and Ash will look back at her retreating figure. He will then take out the half ribbon which he always bring with him and look at it with a warm smile but with hints of sadness. Then May, as she walked away from them, looked at her other ribbon half with a smile on her lips. Their facial expression seemed to tell that they long for each other, but at the same time understand that they'll see each other again. . . . Then May will find out that the ferry/boat/ whatever got cancelled and frustrate about how she couldn't go to the contest anymore. Then Ash will appear and she will be surprised to see him there. He will then say that he heard about the port being closed and came running to see and comfort her. Because the next contest was until few months later, he invited her to join their group while she waited and she agreed with a smile& slight blush on her cheek. The blushing will be up to viewer's interpretation whether she's red on the cheeks because she's crying or because of Ash's gesture. . . Off course , Ash can use Noivern to help May reach her next contest . Because Noivern is faster then Dragonite and Dragonite is faster then sound which allow him to circle the globe in 16 hour. I mean , What is the point of having 3 flying type if none of them is good enough to give Ash a ride. I think , it would be even Cooler if May faces an emotional turmoil and Drew can't help her recover SO Ash use Noivern to travel all the way to her and then wear a ridiculous outfit & Mask to secretly battle May in order to help her recover. (As he heard from Max or figure out from May's last call) May realize the person inside the Mask is Ash and she's touched to see Ash gone so far just to help her. Plus you said yourself that its better to focus on One girl rather then make Ash a young Harem Protagonist. I believe that Girl should be May because she is exclusive to Pokémon! There aren't any other Anime girl with similar haircut and design as May. I seen a lot of Anime girl with better One-side Ponytail then Misty But I have yet to see any other girl like May. Here is my pairing-- Ash X May Clemont X Serena Drew X Iris Misty X Tracey Brock X Battle Chatelaine Dana Dawn X Gary . Ah, right. I didn't notice I haven't replied to this. . . About the "Fly" move, I knew and thought about it. I was thinking the region is an island where flying is forbidden because it will disturb the native polkemons and the only way to get there is through a ship. . . (or walking?) Yes, I did say I'd prefer it if they just focus on one girl. . . And I agree that May is like the most iconic character of Pokémon (besides Ash). It's like she's he's female counterpart! Really, I'm surprised when I saw polls that prefer Pearl shipping, I understand Pokeshipping though. She's the most original character out of all the girls. Also, she gives off the classical feel in it (game or anime). The problem? I doubt that the anime will do that. It seemed to me they planned her to be with Ash but abandoned the idea, simply because the next generation girls (Dawn, Iris, Serena) will be needed to campaign for the game and they won't sell much if Ash is taken. The same with May, they can't make a canon pairing with May because she's like so popular in games (especially heavily hinting her with Brendan). Guess, that's why they made the remake of ORAS. However, even game or manga (Sapphire&Ruby) didn't make it canon shipping even though it's heavily implied because of anime. May simply can't be paired easily without disappointing some target markets. That's the problem with iconic celebrities like May and Ash, they can't be paired with anyone yet because they need them to promote the next games/series. But if they did made a pairing with Ash, I really hope it's May because she's the most deserving.
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Post by docboy on Dec 2, 2015 4:21:36 GMT -8
Off course , Ash can use Noivern to help May reach her next contest . Because Noivern is faster then Dragonite and Dragonite is faster then sound which allow him to circle the globe in 16 hour. I mean , What is the point of having 3 flying type if none of them is good enough to give Ash a ride. I think , it would be even Cooler if May faces an emotional turmoil and Drew can't help her recover SO Ash use Noivern to travel all the way to her and then wear a ridiculous outfit & Mask to secretly battle May in order to help her recover. (As he heard from Max or figure out from May's last call) May realize the person inside the Mask is Ash and she's touched to see Ash gone so far just to help her. Plus you said yourself that its better to focus on One girl rather then make Ash a young Harem Protagonist. I believe that Girl should be May because she is exclusive to Pokémon! There aren't any other Anime girl with similar haircut and design as May. I seen a lot of Anime girl with better One-side Ponytail then Misty But I have yet to see any other girl like May. Here is my pairing-- Ash X May Clemont X Serena Drew X Iris Misty X Tracey Brock X Battle Chatelaine Dana Dawn X Gary . Ah, right. I didn't notice I haven't replied to this. . . About the "Fly" move, I knew and thought about it. I was thinking the region is an island where flying is forbidden because it will disturb the native polkemons and the only way to get there is through a ship. . . (or walking?) Yes, I did say I'd prefer it if they just focus on one girl. . . And I agree that May is like the most iconic character of Pokémon (besides Ash). It's like she's he's female counterpart! Really, I'm surprised when I saw polls that prefer Pearl shipping, I understand Pokeshipping though. She's the most original character out of all the girls. Also, she gives off the classical feel in it (game or anime). The problem? I doubt that the anime will do that. It seemed to me they planned her to be with Ash but abandoned the idea, simply because the next generation girls (Dawn, Iris, Serena) will be needed to campaign for the game and they won't sell much if Ash is taken. The same with May, they can't make a canon pairing with May because she's like so popular in games (especially heavily hinting her with Brendan). Guess, that's why they made the remake of ORAS. However, even game or manga (Sapphire&Ruby) didn't make it canon shipping even though it's heavily implied because of anime. May simply can't be paired easily without disappointing some target markets. That's the problem with iconic celebrities like May and Ash, they can't be paired with anyone yet because they need them to promote the next games/series. But if they did made a pairing with Ash, I really hope it's May because she's the most deserving.I agree. But it makes me sad that May left the show. Paring him with Ash now would be a problem because today's kids don't even know who she is. But I'd be filled with joy if they bring her back so that the new audience can get to know her and then develop their friendship into a relationship. I stopped following the show years ago but if they take that route I'd gladly make an exception and break the habit. If they really planned them to be together and called it off maybe they'll go back to it some day
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Post by ads on Dec 2, 2015 6:07:17 GMT -8
Off course , Ash can use Noivern to help May reach her next contest . Because Noivern is faster then Dragonite and Dragonite is faster then sound which allow him to circle the globe in 16 hour. I mean , What is the point of having 3 flying type if none of them is good enough to give Ash a ride. I think , it would be even Cooler if May faces an emotional turmoil and Drew can't help her recover SO Ash use Noivern to travel all the way to her and then wear a ridiculous outfit & Mask to secretly battle May in order to help her recover. (As he heard from Max or figure out from May's last call) May realize the person inside the Mask is Ash and she's touched to see Ash gone so far just to help her. Plus you said yourself that its better to focus on One girl rather then make Ash a young Harem Protagonist. I believe that Girl should be May because she is exclusive to Pokémon! There aren't any other Anime girl with similar haircut and design as May. I seen a lot of Anime girl with better One-side Ponytail then Misty But I have yet to see any other girl like May. Here is my pairing-- Ash X May Clemont X Serena Drew X Iris Misty X Tracey Brock X Battle Chatelaine Dana Dawn X Gary . Ah, right. I didn't notice I haven't replied to this. . . About the "Fly" move, I knew and thought about it. I was thinking the region is an island where flying is forbidden because it will disturb the native polkemons and the only way to get there is through a ship. . . (or walking?) Yes, I did say I'd prefer it if they just focus on one girl. . . And I agree that May is like the most iconic character of Pokémon (besides Ash). It's like she's he's female counterpart! Really, I'm surprised when I saw polls that prefer Pearl shipping, I understand Pokeshipping though. She's the most original character out of all the girls. Also, she gives off the classical feel in it (game or anime). The problem? I doubt that the anime will do that. It seemed to me they planned her to be with Ash but abandoned the idea, simply because the next generation girls (Dawn, Iris, Serena) will be needed to campaign for the game and they won't sell much if Ash is taken. The same with May, they can't make a canon pairing with May because she's like so popular in games (especially heavily hinting her with Brendan). Guess, that's why they made the remake of ORAS. However, even game or manga (Sapphire&Ruby) didn't make it canon shipping even though it's heavily implied because of anime. May simply can't be paired easily without disappointing some target markets. That's the problem with iconic celebrities like May and Ash, they can't be paired with anyone yet because they need them to promote the next games/series. But if they did made a pairing with Ash, I really hope it's May because she's the most deserving.Its because of these stupid thing Writer/Director doing , Pokémon Anime losing Popularity. Can you name any Endless or Long running Popular adventure anime that change every character except the Protagonist? Also , People will pair Ash with new girl even if he & May show feeling for one another! So , Ash doesn't need to be single in order to promote the Next game. From what I know , Practically all Kids Anime chose One girl as the Protagonist's main love interest. I think , The Anime should do it with Ash & May . Plus , The anime really need to show a good Advanceshippy hint that imply Romantic relationship instate of strong friendship after "AG 162 : Spontaneous Combusken" ! Because that episode will take most hope for Advanceshipping.
Surprisingly , May is the only Heroin who never got her own special episode ! Even after ORAS release which serve as a good excuse for a Special May episode. I wonder , Is it because Writer has something Big planned for May ! Off Course , If Atsuhiro Tomioka write a Special May episode then we can kiss Advanceshipping goodbye because that guy is obsesses with Contestshipping. Every other writer treat Drew & May as Rival But Atsuhiro Tomioka always treat them like a couple. Every major Contestshipping episode is written by Atsuhiro Tomioka. Apparently , He thinks it important for Drew & May to be couple but its not important for Ash to get Megevolution.
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Post by docboy on Dec 2, 2015 6:29:00 GMT -8
That makes me sad because drew is such an asshole. She deserves better
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Post by ads on Dec 2, 2015 7:11:05 GMT -8
That makes me sad because drew is such an asshole. She deserves better Well , The stunt that Ash pulled in Sea Temple is enough to make any girl fall head over the hill for him! Question is , Is it strong enough to make May fall for Ash over Drew ? Plus , Is M09 consider to be canon ? Also , It would be cool if there is a episode where May is taken to another Dimension by a mysterious Pokemon. Alone and scared , May took her part of of Terracotta ribbon and wish someone to save her. Then the emotional value of the ribbon allow it connect with its other half and create portal to show Ash a crying May. Ash jump into portal without to save May! After Ash encourage May , they both look for the Pokemon who brought them here so they can get out. After they solve the matter , The Pokemon send Ash & May to where they came from. Ash & May say their farewell while looking at each other grimly. Later when May return to her place , Drew & others ask about whereabouts and how did she came out. May simply said that she was saved by her hero while looking at her half of Terracotta ribbon. Basically A Dark Ocean plot form Digimon Adventure 02.
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Post by docboy on Dec 2, 2015 8:33:32 GMT -8
I like the first half but not the part that they had to say goodbye. If he was the one who saved her, you might as well go all the way and have them stay together and admit their feelings for one another. Otherwise why have her return to drew in the first place? And I still don't understand why people would like to see her end up with him if he's such a jerk. Does he become nicer later on? Am I missing something here?
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Post by docboy on Dec 2, 2015 8:42:55 GMT -8
Besides it's not just the sea temple. Ash has been nice to her all along. He's been a great friend and a good mentor and he saved your life, what more could a girl want? It works for me
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Post by ads on Dec 2, 2015 20:16:38 GMT -8
I like the first half but not the part that they had to say goodbye. If he was the one who saved her, you might as well go all the way and have them stay together and admit their feelings for one another. Otherwise why have her return to drew in the first place? And I still don't understand why people would like to see her end up with him if he's such a jerk. Does he become nicer later on? Am I missing something here? They say Goodbye because Ash is in Kalos and May is in another region! Do you want them to abandon their goal? Also , Mainly PokeShipper and girls support Contestshipping. Because Pokeshipper want Drew to take May away so she doesn't get between Ash & Misty. Girls doesn't have problem with Contestshipping because they see hot , dazzling & shining guy like Drew teasing the shoujo protagonist and winning her heart all the time. They see Contestshipping as a Shoujo love-story where May is protagonist , Drew is the hero and Ash is the side-character who's getting between a destined couple. After all , Drew is one of the Best-looking preteen guy in Pokemon anime! Have you seen any Shoujo series where the protagonist chose average-looking guys like Ash or Brock over hot , dazzling & shining guy like Drew ? Its because Shoujo series are for girls and they want the protagonist to end up with hot dazzling guy.
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Post by docboy on Dec 2, 2015 23:47:21 GMT -8
I see your point but he's still obnoxious. As for them saying goodbye it shouldn't be an issue. They don't have to abandon their goals. They came travel together and pursue their goals together like they did in the show
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