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Post by Thanos on Nov 29, 2015 22:11:07 GMT -8
My best scenario is a follow-up to Movie 9 where Phantom escapes and goes after May to lure out Manaphy. I don't have the exact details; my creative mind works best when it's writing fanfiction. But I can say for sure that AdvanceShipping-ness ensues and Ash saves the day and the two go all kissy-kissy and stuff. You can use your imagination from there. I already have. I started writing a fic about it a while back. I have six chapters so far Link? I'd love to check it out.
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Post by ads on Nov 29, 2015 22:12:32 GMT -8
Here is another idea , A ORAS special where Iris meet May where May show her the Terracotta ribbon and tell her that it contain the memory of someone very special to her. Just like Doreamon episode "What a Scoop! Nobita and the Secret Date" where Nobita meet a grown up Sumire from Perman who talk about waiting for Mitsuo. Off course , It would be also cool if Iris and Drew develop some sort of hate/rivalry. Its due to Iris being a wild girl from ancient village who prefer tough stuff while Drew is Pretty boy from technically advanced city who prefer beautiful thing. Its as if Iris & Drew are complete opposite of another other.
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Post by docboy on Nov 29, 2015 22:19:37 GMT -8
I already have. I started writing a fic about it a while back. I have six chapters so far Link? I'd love to check it out. Well I'm using my smartphone right now and I'm having a little trouble with the copy paste thing. But the story is called comfort and it's on fanfiction.net. My name there is doc boy as it is here so you know where to find me. I've been busy with other stories lately so it's not finished but I'll add more to it when I can
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Post by ads on Nov 30, 2015 3:50:25 GMT -8
Continuation: With May and Serena's teamwork, they reunited safely with the group. Ash is so happy to see them safe. Now, Serena thinks that May is very admirable and nice. But as she saw the two of them talking again, her jealousy sprang again. . . That was until May mentioned that she's going on a different region to compete with her long time rival, Drew. Apparently, she already won against him a couple of times. However, she also suffered several defeats. Drew is one win ahead of her and she's planning to make it even with the next contest. Serena: Uh, who's Drew? May: *smiles* He's my rival! But he's a good person. He helped me a lot of times and gave me lots of advice with Pokémons. Ash: *Raising an eyebrow* Oh really? Then what about me? You should have told her that it's ME who taught you the basics [ what's this? He's slightly jealous at May having another mentor?] May: Ahahaha, come on, Ash. You know your still my best teacher, right? Ash: *slightly blushing as he looked away* Well, as long as we have the facts straight. They say their good byes. As May left, Ash looked at her with passionate eyes. Behind him, Serena watched with worry. On the spur of the moment, she gained the courage to ask him. "Ash. . . what's your relationship with May?" Viewers could only see his back as he faced the setting sun. There was a second pause as he answered. ". . . She's my friend. A very great partner and the next best coordinator in the world." At hearing his response that they were just friends, she felt reassured. She smiled warmly and both of them went their own ways. As they walked, Ash looked at May's direction one more time. He smiled as he looked down, his eyes shadowed by his bangs/rim of his hat. ........................... Ya but it feel like Ash being friendzoned there ! What the anime really need is a strong implication of Ash & May's Romantic feeling ! For example , Ash actually get stunned by seeing May in her ORAS outfit and blushes. While When Drew is surround by his fangirl , Lisia ask May if she feel jealous but Lisia Notice May looking at Ash & Serena talking with a minor jealous expression. off course , Most dynamic would be a rich & spoiled girl who hates May and believed Drew to be her crush so she tires to steal Drew away from her. But May seem totally unaffected no many time that girl flirt with Drew. But When Ash & That girl end up in an "Awkward" situation then it finally cause May to show the angry jealous reaction that girl wanted to see . So , That girl started to flirt with Ash to spite May however she herself fall for Ash for real.
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Post by docboy on Nov 30, 2015 4:05:37 GMT -8
Continuation: With May and Serena's teamwork, they reunited safely with the group. Ash is so happy to see them safe. Now, Serena thinks that May is very admirable and nice. But as she saw the two of them talking again, her jealousy sprang again. . . That was until May mentioned that she's going on a different region to compete with her long time rival, Drew. Apparently, she already won against him a couple of times. However, she also suffered several defeats. Drew is one win ahead of her and she's planning to make it even with the next contest. Serena: Uh, who's Drew? May: *smiles* He's my rival! But he's a good person. He helped me a lot of times and gave me lots of advice with Pokémons. Ash: *Raising an eyebrow* Oh really? Then what about me? You should have told her that it's ME who taught you the basics [ what's this? He's slightly jealous at May having another mentor?] May: Ahahaha, come on, Ash. You know your still my best teacher, right? Ash: *slightly blushing as he looked away* Well, as long as we have the facts straight. They say their good byes. As May left, Ash looked at her with passionate eyes. Behind him, Serena watched with worry. On the spur of the moment, she gained the courage to ask him. "Ash. . . what's your relationship with May?" Viewers could only see his back as he faced the setting sun. There was a second pause as he answered. ". . . She's my friend. A very great partner and the next best coordinator in the world." At hearing his response that they were just friends, she felt reassured. She smiled warmly and both of them went their own ways. As they walked, Ash looked at May's direction one more time. He smiled as he looked down, his eyes shadowed by his bangs/rim of his hat. ........................... Ya but it feel like Ash being friendzoned there ! What the anime really need is a strong implication of Ash & May's Romantic feeling ! For example , Ash actually get stunned by seeing May in her ORAS outfit and blushes. While When Drew is surround by his fangirl , Lisia ask May if she feel jealous but Lisia Notice May looking at Ash & Serena talking with a minor jealous expression. off course , Most dynamic would be a rich & spoiled girl who hates May and believed Drew to be her crush so she tires to steal Drew away from her. But May seem totally unaffected no many time that girl flirt with Drew. But When Ash & That girl end up in an "Awkward" situation then it finally cause May to show the angry jealous reaction that girl wanted to see . So , That girl started to flirt with Ash to spite May however she herself fall for Ash for real. That's a good idea. When she gets really jealous she snaps and tells him how she feels and runs of crying and it's up to him to set things right
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Post by M.Press on Nov 30, 2015 4:28:45 GMT -8
Ya but it feel like Ash being friendzoned there ! What the anime really need is a strong implication of Ash & May's Romantic feeling ! For example , Ash actually get stunned by seeing May in her ORAS outfit and blushes. While When Drew is surround by his fangirl , Lisia ask May if she feel jealous but Lisia Notice May looking at Ash & Serena talking with a minor jealous expression. off course , Most dynamic would be a rich & spoiled girl who hates May and believed Drew to be her crush so she tires to steal Drew away from her. But May seem totally unaffected no many time that girl flirt with Drew. But When Ash & That girl end up in an "Awkward" situation then it finally cause May to show the angry jealous reaction that girl wanted to see . So , That girl started to flirt with Ash to spite May however she herself fall for Ash for real. I understand what you mean, but I made it that way because I want it to sound canon. The topic of this thread is "How should the anime handle their relationship". I doubt the anime will make a very obvious hint of romance between the two. The ending could be interpreted in different ways. As Ash is a very dense character who doesn't get "love", he won't go around acting like that. It's very typical in this kind of boy-focused (harem) anime with no canon pairing to make only the girls react to things like jealousy (It really annoys me when it's always the girls who reacted). As I said, the ending left a lot of room for argument for any shippers. For example: Ash chose to help May again in the camp instead of Serena. He also stated that May is the future "best coordinator" when Dawn was also aiming for the same thing. He's also seemed jealous that May is giving the credit to Drew when it comes to advices. Then, when May left, he looked back at her retreating figure again and had a mysterious smile on his lips. . . something which he hadn't done with the other girls. He may have said their friends but his actions are saying something else. Still, there are other evidences that could state otherwise which the other shippers (contest/amour shippers mainly) could use to satisfy their selves. I made the episode in which it could cater to everybody's tastes. There are no obvious hints of love from Ash's side, something I noticed the anime kept on doing. Also, in the episode I stated, when May and Ash are talking, they act in similar manners to the point that their personalities are complementary which was what Serena was jealous of. I forgot to add this though: May had a different hairstyle (longer hair possibly which she ties in ponytail), Ash will comment about that which will be something since he's the dense type of character who doesn't notice when a girl changes hairstyle/ clothes. May will tease him for it saying "wow, Ash. You've learned to complement girls. You're much manlier than last time~" (Refers to the love themed episode when she constantly teases ash with "spoken like a man~"/ "aaand he doesn't get it") He blushes and tried to brush it off, saying "Shut up, it's because you always have such a boyish haircut!" That would tick off May, "What did you say?" and then they would go with verbal fight which will end with them laughing together.
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Post by Thanos on Nov 30, 2015 19:22:29 GMT -8
Link? I'd love to check it out. Well I'm using my smartphone right now and I'm having a little trouble with the copy paste thing. But the story is called comfort and it's on fanfiction.net. My name there is doc boy as it is here so you know where to find me. I've been busy with other stories lately so it's not finished but I'll add more to it when I can Okay, thanks. Ya but it feel like Ash being friendzoned there ! What the anime really need is a strong implication of Ash & May's Romantic feeling ! For example , Ash actually get stunned by seeing May in her ORAS outfit and blushes. While When Drew is surround by his fangirl , Lisia ask May if she feel jealous but Lisia Notice May looking at Ash & Serena talking with a minor jealous expression. off course , Most dynamic would be a rich & spoiled girl who hates May and believed Drew to be her crush so she tires to steal Drew away from her. But May seem totally unaffected no many time that girl flirt with Drew. But When Ash & That girl end up in an "Awkward" situation then it finally cause May to show the angry jealous reaction that girl wanted to see . So , That girl started to flirt with Ash to spite May however she herself fall for Ash for real. I understand what you mean, but I made it that way because I want it to sound canon. The topic of this thread is "How should the anime handle their relationship". I doubt the anime will make a very obvious hint of romance between the two. The ending could be interpreted in different ways. As Ash is a very dense character who doesn't get "love", he won't go around acting like that. It's very typical in this kind of boy-focused (harem) anime with no canon pairing to make only the girls react to things like jealousy (It really annoys me when it's always the girls who reacted). As I said, the ending left a lot of room for argument for any shippers. For example: Ash chose to help May again in the camp instead of Serena. He also stated that May is the future "best coordinator" when Dawn was also aiming for the same thing. He's also seemed jealous that May is giving the credit to Drew when it comes to advices. Then, when May left, he looked back at her retreating figure again and had a mysterious smile on his lips. . . something which he hadn't done with the other girls. He may have said their friends but his actions are saying something else. Still, there are other evidences that could state otherwise which the other shippers (contest/amour shippers mainly) could use to satisfy their selves. I made the episode in which it could cater to everybody's tastes. There are no obvious hints of love from Ash's side, something I noticed the anime kept on doing. Also, in the episode I stated, when May and Ash are talking, they act in similar manners to the point that their personalities are complementary which was what Serena was jealous of. I forgot to add this though: May had a different hairstyle (longer hair possibly which she ties in ponytail), Ash will comment about that which will be something since he's the dense type of character who doesn't notice when a girl changes hairstyle/ clothes. May will tease him for it saying "wow, Ash. You've learned to complement girls. You're much manlier than last time~" (Refers to the love themed episode when she constantly teases ash with "spoken like a man~"/ "aaand he doesn't get it") He blushes and tried to brush it off, saying "Shut up, it's because you always have such a boyish haircut!" That would tick off May, "What did you say?" and then they would go with verbal fight which will end with them laughing together. Thank God for you. Go as realistic as possible; that's always the best way when making up a scenario for your favorite show! Anyway, I can't imagine May changing her hairstyle that drastically, but I guess it works. Forgot if ORAS has the Trainer customization option; if they do, then it could be a reference to that. Here is another idea , A ORAS special where Iris meet May where May show her the Terracotta ribbon and tell her that it contain the memory of someone very special to her. Just like Doreamon episode "What a Scoop! Nobita and the Secret Date" where Nobita meet a grown up Sumire from Perman who talk about waiting for Mitsuo. Off course , It would be also cool if Iris and Drew develop some sort of hate/rivalry. Its due to Iris being a wild girl from ancient village who prefer tough stuff while Drew is Pretty boy from technically advanced city who prefer beautiful thing. Its as if Iris & Drew are complete opposite of another other. What in the world are you talking about? This is an AdvanceShipping thread, you know; talk AdvanceShipping!
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Post by ads on Nov 30, 2015 22:12:14 GMT -8
Ya but it feel like Ash being friendzoned there ! What the anime really need is a strong implication of Ash & May's Romantic feeling ! For example , Ash actually get stunned by seeing May in her ORAS outfit and blushes. While When Drew is surround by his fangirl , Lisia ask May if she feel jealous but Lisia Notice May looking at Ash & Serena talking with a minor jealous expression. off course , Most dynamic would be a rich & spoiled girl who hates May and believed Drew to be her crush so she tires to steal Drew away from her. But May seem totally unaffected no many time that girl flirt with Drew. But When Ash & That girl end up in an "Awkward" situation then it finally cause May to show the angry jealous reaction that girl wanted to see . So , That girl started to flirt with Ash to spite May however she herself fall for Ash for real. I understand what you mean, but I made it that way because I want it to sound canon. The topic of this thread is "How should the anime handle their relationship". I doubt the anime will make a very obvious hint of romance between the two. The ending could be interpreted in different ways. As Ash is a very dense character who doesn't get "love", he won't go around acting like that. It's very typical in this kind of boy-focused (harem) anime with no canon pairing to make only the girls react to things like jealousy (It really annoys me when it's always the girls who reacted). As I said, the ending left a lot of room for argument for any shippers. For example: Ash chose to help May again in the camp instead of Serena. He also stated that May is the future "best coordinator" when Dawn was also aiming for the same thing. He's also seemed jealous that May is giving the credit to Drew when it comes to advices. Then, when May left, he looked back at her retreating figure again and had a mysterious smile on his lips. . . something which he hadn't done with the other girls. He may have said their friends but his actions are saying something else. Still, there are other evidences that could state otherwise which the other shippers (contest/amour shippers mainly) could use to satisfy their selves. I made the episode in which it could cater to everybody's tastes. There are no obvious hints of love from Ash's side, something I noticed the anime kept on doing. Also, in the episode I stated, when May and Ash are talking, they act in similar manners to the point that their personalities are complementary which was what Serena was jealous of. I forgot to add this though: May had a different hairstyle (longer hair possibly which she ties in ponytail), Ash will comment about that which will be something since he's the dense type of character who doesn't notice when a girl changes hairstyle/ clothes. May will tease him for it saying "wow, Ash. You've learned to complement girls. You're much manlier than last time~" (Refers to the love themed episode when she constantly teases ash with "spoken like a man~"/ "aaand he doesn't get it") He blushes and tried to brush it off, saying "Shut up, it's because you always have such a boyish haircut!" That would tick off May, "What did you say?" and then they would go with verbal fight which will end with them laughing together. If the Anime want to balance out all the ship then the Anime has to add jealousy ! Because Contestshipping has strong implication of Romance while Advanceshipping only has strong implication of strong friendship . So if Contestshipping has Blushing then Advanceshipping should have jealousy on its side. It doesn't make Advanceshipping fully canon as you think. After all , Pokeshipping still not canon even though Misty was jealous of Macey for flirting with Ash! Same thing happen when Ash got jealous when Misty paid more attention to another guy. Its because Ash is 10 year old so I believe a better Advanceshipping would be where both him and May develop feeling but remain unaware of their own feeling until they grow old enough to understand it. So , their feeling will sub-consciously leak out ! Jealousy is the best implication because you don't have to know your in love to get jealous. Plus I notice all you hint come from Ash's side , Not from May's side !
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Post by docboy on Dec 1, 2015 4:43:51 GMT -8
I agree with ads. It can be subconscious at that age and it can still work to an extent. It would make things more innocent. In the story I mentioned I'm trying to make it as innocent as possible. I will say though that I like May's hairstyle the way it is and I don't think she should change it
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Post by M.Press on Dec 1, 2015 10:27:13 GMT -8
Because Contestshipping has strong implication of Romance while Advanceshipping only has strong implication of strong friendship . So if Contestshipping has Blushing then Advanceshipping should have jealousy on its side. It doesn't make Advanceshipping fully canon as you think. You've misunderstood me, I'm not against the "jealousy" thing. In fact, I've added that with Ash's side, though as subtly as possible such as him reacting to May's comment about Drew being her benefactor. You are right in the sense that jealousy is one of the obvious hints of romance and shouldn't be omitted. I'm just saying that the anime will usually handle their relationship in a way that could be interpreted in two ways. . . Ah, pokeshipping. . . the only shipping that I view as a real threat in advance and any other Ash shipping because she's the "first girl" of the anime and the only one Ash showed serious hints (such as jealousy) that can be threatening. It's a shame for Misty's fans, but it reeaaaalllly lessened my worries with her gone. Of course jealousy doesn't make it canon. However, showing totally obvious mutual interest will hint towards it. . . something I noticed the anime was trying to avoid (hell, they got rid of Misty!) Exactly! That's why I said in the ending where Ash claimed to be "just friends" with May will be very subjected to debates in the forums because he's actions and facial expression say otherwise. As Ash is not really in-tuned with his emotions, his reactions to love will be quite platonic. The best way for him to show attraction to someone is when he's jealous and being really "friendly" with her. Oops. . . I've been found out, aren't I? . . . Warning: There will be a small rant from Frantic Empress . . . 。゚゚(」。≧□≦)」 So what if I want Ash to show the hints this time!? He always get the girls to like him! It's time for him to show some hints! <!–・”(>0<)”・ –> If we want it to be canon, there needs to be strong hints from HIS SIDE!!! We can't just push all the hints to come from May! I'm tired that it's girls who always have to act just because a guy is dense! Denseness in NOT an excuse! He, too, needs to get his act in the gear! ‾͟͟͞(((ꎤ >口<)̂ꎤ⁾⁾⁾⁾︵ ┻━┻ *Ahem* *ahem* Ignoring my personal opinion aside . . . yes, in this episode, I want Ash to show many hints (though very subtle that the other shippers won't react much) that would point to his interest in May. Throughout the episode, as May continues to befriend Serena because she seemed uncomfortable, Ash would continually try to get her attention via talking to her, offer small helps, etc. I agree with you that their relationship should be handled innocently. As Ash likes her (even though he doesn't know it), he subconsciously try to gain her attention throughout the episodes. . . but in a friendly-manner-sort-of-way. . . because he doesn't get it yet. The best way for anime to handle Advance shipping is to show how great their dynamic is. I'm not sure if it's still the same, but I remember that May is the only girl that Ash treated differently in the entire series, right? They don't bicker a lot, they always seem to understand each other even without words. Just their very close relationship is enough to show how deep their bond is. . . I'm just saying that there's no need for the cliche drama on May's side (unless handled perfectly). Serena, maybe, but not May. ============================================================================= Thank God for you. Go as realistic as possible; that's always the best way when making up a scenario for your favorite show! Anyway, I can't imagine May changing her hairstyle that drastically, but I guess it works. Forgot if ORAS has the Trainer customization option; if they do, then it could be a reference to that. My, thank you for appreciating it. Hmm, me too. I've tried drawing May with longer hair several times and she come off as a more mature lady. . . Her latest version in ORAS could work. . . I think I know what Ads is talking about. . . That's a crack pairing that could potentially remove Drew as a hindrance for Advance shipping. So, let it slide?
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Post by docboy on Dec 1, 2015 11:32:48 GMT -8
Listen on another note I'm looking for scenarios to write in an advanced shipping story I'm working on. I got a few chapters done but now I'm drawing a blank. Anyone any ideas?
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Post by M.Press on Dec 1, 2015 12:03:20 GMT -8
Listen on another note I'm looking for scenarios to write in an advanced shipping story I'm working on. I got a few chapters done but now I'm drawing a blank. Anyone any ideas? What's the story about?
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Post by Thanos on Dec 1, 2015 13:50:34 GMT -8
I think I know what Ads is talking about. . . That's a crack pairing that could potentially remove Drew as a hindrance for Advance shipping. So, let it slide? I think he could've made it a BIT more obvious.
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Post by ads on Dec 2, 2015 0:25:51 GMT -8
Because Contestshipping has strong implication of Romance while Advanceshipping only has strong implication of strong friendship . So if Contestshipping has Blushing then Advanceshipping should have jealousy on its side. It doesn't make Advanceshipping fully canon as you think. You've misunderstood me, I'm not against the "jealousy" thing. In fact, I've added that with Ash's side, though as subtly as possible such as him reacting to May's comment about Drew being her benefactor. You are right in the sense that jealousy is one of the obvious hints of romance and shouldn't be omitted. I'm just saying that the anime will usually handle their relationship in a way that could be interpreted in two ways. . . Ah, pokeshipping. . . the only shipping that I view as a real threat in advance and any other Ash shipping because she's the "first girl" of the anime and the only one Ash showed serious hints (such as jealousy) that can be threatening. It's a shame for Misty's fans, but it reeaaaalllly lessened my worries with her gone. Of course jealousy doesn't make it canon. However, showing totally obvious mutual interest will hint towards it. . . something I noticed the anime was trying to avoid (hell, they got rid of Misty!) Exactly! That's why I said in the ending where Ash claimed to be "just friends" with May will be very subjected to debates in the forums because he's actions and facial expression say otherwise. As Ash is not really in-tuned with his emotions, his reactions to love will be quite platonic. The best way for him to show attraction to someone is when he's jealous and being really "friendly" with her. Oops. . . I've been found out, aren't I? . . . Warning: There will be a small rant from Frantic Empress . . . 。゚゚(」。≧□≦)」 So what if I want Ash to show the hints this time!? He always get the girls to like him! It's time for him to show some hints! <!–・”(>0<)”・ –> If we want it to be canon, there needs to be strong hints from HIS SIDE!!! We can't just push all the hints to come from May! I'm tired that it's girls who always have to act just because a guy is dense! Denseness in NOT an excuse! He, too, needs to get his act in the gear! ‾͟͟͞(((ꎤ >口<)̂ꎤ⁾⁾⁾⁾︵ ┻━┻ *Ahem* *ahem* Ignoring my personal opinion aside . . . yes, in this episode, I want Ash to show many hints (though very subtle that the other shippers won't react much) that would point to his interest in May. Throughout the episode, as May continues to befriend Serena because she seemed uncomfortable, Ash would continually try to get her attention via talking to her, offer small helps, etc. I agree with you that their relationship should be handled innocently. As Ash likes her (even though he doesn't know it), he subconsciously try to gain her attention throughout the episodes. . . but in a friendly-manner-sort-of-way. . . because he doesn't get it yet. The best way for anime to handle Advance shipping is to show how great their dynamic is. I'm not sure if it's still the same, but I remember that May is the only girl that Ash treated differently in the entire series, right? They don't bicker a lot, they always seem to understand each other even without words. Just their very close relationship is enough to show how deep their bond is. . . I'm just saying that there's no need for the cliche drama on May's side (unless handled perfectly). Serena, maybe, but not May. ============================================================================= Thank God for you. Go as realistic as possible; that's always the best way when making up a scenario for your favorite show! Anyway, I can't imagine May changing her hairstyle that drastically, but I guess it works. Forgot if ORAS has the Trainer customization option; if they do, then it could be a reference to that. My, thank you for appreciating it. Hmm, me too. I've tried drawing May with longer hair several times and she come off as a more mature lady. . . Her latest version in ORAS could work. . . I think I know what Ads is talking about. . . That's a crack pairing that could potentially remove Drew as a hindrance for Advance shipping. So, let it slide? However , It still feel more like an Amourshipping fanfic with more Naruto /School rumble situation. Plus , Ash's feeling need to be unconfirmed if Writer wants to support all Shipping. Also , There are people who runt about Ash stealing all the spotlight from Dawn in DP even though Dawn got more thing then Ash ever got in this 20 year. Also May , Dawn & Iris never shown confirmed feeling for Ash and Misty's feeling is alleged ! Only 4 girl shown confirmed feeling for Ash and Serena is the only one who actually cute while rest of them are just average-looking. Truth is , May also need to show hint toward Ash as well ! She need show a hint that counter her blushing from "AG 162 : Spontaneous Combusken"!Honestly , Writer should make a similar episode as that one where Serena play the role the "Brianna".
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Post by M.Press on Dec 2, 2015 0:42:26 GMT -8
However , It still feel more like an Amourshipping fanfic with more Naruto /School rumble situation. Plus , Ash's feeling need to be unconfirmed if Writer wants to support all Shipping. Also , There are people who runt about Ash stealing all the spotlight from Dawn in DP even though Dawn got more thing then Ash ever got in this 20 year. Also May , Dawn & Iris never shown confirmed feeling for Ash and Misty's feeling is alleged ! Only 4 girl shown confirmed feeling for Ash and Serena is the only one who actually cute while rest of them are just average-looking. Truth is , May also need to show hint toward Ash as well ! She need show a hint that counter her blushing from "AG 162 : Spontaneous Combusken"!Honestly , Writer should make a similar episode as that one where Serena play the role the "Brianna". Hmm.. . well, I think I overdid the subtlety on that one. . . Okay, to revise, let's remove the ending part where Serena asked Ash about their relationship (it'll be against Pearl shipping anyway). . . They will just go on their separate ways and Ash will look back at her retreating figure. He will then take out the half ribbon which he always bring with him and look at it with a warm smile but with hints of sadness. Then May, as she walked away from them, looked at her other ribbon half with a smile on her lips. Their facial expression seemed to tell that they long for each other, but at the same time understand that they'll see each other again. . . . Then May will find out that the ferry/boat/ whatever got cancelled and frustrate about how she couldn't go to the contest anymore. Then Ash will appear and she will be surprised to see him there. He will then say that he heard about the port being closed and came running to see and comfort her. Because the next contest was until few months later, he invited her to join their group while she waited and she agreed with a smile& slight blush on her cheek. The blushing will be up to viewer's interpretation whether she's red on the cheeks because she's crying or because of Ash's gesture. . .
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